Critique my Flash Microsite


ok... it's way off being 100% complete... pre-loader needs work, , bottom 3 boxes aren't ready, , content added...

see think... to this

i'm going ad more transitions between each page, plus lot more movements , animation.

feedback positive , negative appreciated
 

it dark. maybe intention, still find not pleasing eye using combination of black , pink much.

also, scroll bar @ homepage made more nice looking. same boxes put info (last name, etc). maybe rounding them can improve lot.


aside that, think pretty good.:)
 


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